Hi Chris. Omg. I loved both stories. Your writing is so beautiful. I felt like I was with both women in both time frames. I honestly thought that John was going to be the perfect man that every woman would want. He sounded so charismatic and the most loving man. Your introductory chapter had me as much as he had her loving him. I never doubted him until she was at the hotel. I could cry for her but I was too angry. I love how you ended it! Well done.
As for Emily, I felt like I grew up beside her and how scared she must have been in a world of such destruction and then the depression. I felt like it was what my ancestors went through only with descriptions. Which is more than my parents or grandparents would ever talk about.
Both stories had me wanting more.
I am honoured that you gave me the opportunity to read your work
Cary Anne Orr - Author